Assignment 5
Susan
Orlean composed this article for The New
Yorker to illustrate a taxidermist’s life and to show the world the culture
that makes up this society of people that love to bring dead animals back to
life. Or perhaps she wrote this article because she wanted to humanize this
trade, which for so many people is considered to be awful, evil, and
disgusting. It does seem that way, because she doesn’t seem to discriminate
against the people she met. Rather, it seems as though she came to favor and
admire the taxidermist.
I
believe she wants her readers to keep an open mind when reading this
article. An open mind that will lead her
readers to favor the taxidermist trade that is. If she had a different agenda,
her approach would have been a lot different. She would have used select words
like immoral, awful, cruel, and disgusting. But that’s just it, she doesn’t use
those words.
On the
other hand, I do not believe she was too impartial. At times, it seemed more like
an informative article than an editorial. And I think that is why I was really
not all that excited about reading it. I have mixed feelings on the topic and
much of what she had to say was not going to convince me one way or the other.
Also, I felt like there wasn’t any rising action, climax, falling action, or resolution
to her piece, which made it kind of boring to read. At times, I felt like I was
just reading a transcript or a Wikipedia article. I, however, do believe that
there are or will be some who read this article and will want to dispute or
debate the morality and facts surrounding this article. I think she expects
that.
I obviously
do not think she wanted me to be bored. But, I don’t think she would be
surprised if I told her that is how I felt when I read this article. She
herself said, “In the seminars, the atmosphere was as sober and exacting as a
tax law colloquium.” That’s pretty much how I felt about this article. On a
final note, I believe she wants her readers to dwell on the topic and to have
an opinion. Or possibly she wants her readers to get all the facts before
making any strong opinions one way or the other.
Questions for class
Do you feel any different about the sport of hunting or
taxidermy now that you have read this article?
How did you feel when reading this article?
Do you think Susan Orlean had a personal agenda?
Do you want to make a dead animal come back to life now?
Do you think this was a good article to have published in The New Yorker?
Haha, I love this post so much.
ReplyDeleteFirst, you are a thoughtful, observant reader. I like that you analyze her word choice and compare it to other "factual" types of writing.
Second, that last paragraph is awesome. I love that you put your personal reactions into the post. Work on bringing more of that into your work. (Remember that it's key for your essays! It's all about what you think.)
Thank you also for your questions. They were very useful in our class discussion.
I like how you point out that she does not really make her argument clear on what she wants the reader to think.
ReplyDeleteI also feel like she does make it sound exciting and then makes it sound bad too. You make a great point of this towards the end of this post.
I think that these are both great ideas to consider when revising your paper.